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Wednesday, August 25, 2021

Jolly junk food persuasive writing

                                                Hi im back with some persuasive writing.

Over lockdown I have been working on my persuasive writing, this week mine is on junk food. I love junk food but it is unhealthy so it a sometimes food. You need to have a balanced diet and try not to eat dessert unless you  are exersising because it is unhealthy but if you want to you can, I hope you enjoy.


Junk food at school?

I believe that we should be able to have Junk food at school. We should be able to have junk food because then we will be able to power through our work because of the calories, we will be so hiped up from the simple sugars we might even ask more questions. Who doesn’t want a nice gooey caramel chocolate bar? We would be good for the day and crash at night and have a good sleep.

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  1. Hi Saffy
    Oh, no! I cannot read your blog! Remember that when you cut and paste something from a doc or slide you need to push control, shift, v to make the formatting correct. Could you please try that again?
    Thank you

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