Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, May 7, 2021
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2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
To Saffy
ReplyDeleteI really liked your vine because you draw it on your own but next time you could add some colour.
Lily
Kia ora Saffy,
ReplyDeletethis is a very good vine, I really liked how you showed ways you can do those things, next time I think you would be really good at adding more colors. This is really good keep up the good work!
Neve