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Friday, May 7, 2021

David's DEADLY war

 Davids DEADLY war

It was hard doing my comic as well as all my other work and swiming but I finished it. here is my Blog on my comic Its about David going on a Deadly war trip hope you like it.






Question time:Did he sleep in a bunker with other people 
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 10, 2021 at 11:53 AM

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  2. AnonymousMay 10, 2021 at 11:54 AM

    Kia Ora saffy,
    This is amazing i love your creativity and amagaination. For the question yes he did sleep in a bunker with other people. Next time you could write a bit more about the comic but other than that i think its really good keep up the
    good work! Whats your faveourite Part?
    Neve

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  3. AnonymousMay 12, 2021 at 10:27 AM

    Kia ora saffy,
    I love how you decided to draw your comic yourself. Yes David did sleep in a bunker with his friends Tom and Jerry. Next time I think you could try to do your comic on a slide or a google drawing. Keep up the great work! What was your favourite part?
    Sophie

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  4. AnonymousJune 10, 2021 at 9:47 AM

    Hi saffy
    I really like the way you did the comic by your self next time you could put a bit more writing on it
    Freya

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