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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Anzac day 


Anzac day is a day where you remember the soldiers who died in the world wars.
The wars  took place in Gallipoli  and all around the world.
Anzac day means Australian, New Zealand army corps.
We you’se poppy as a syombel because it was the first flower to grow in flanders feld 

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 22, 2020 at 1:11 PM

    Hi Saffy
    You have picked out some relevant facts about Anzac Day. Next time you could make your blog post a little more detailed with some paragraphs. Remember to include back up detail. Can you include a picture next time?

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  2. AnonymousApril 22, 2020 at 3:03 PM

    Hi Saffy,
    Good to see you doing some research on Anzac Day, which is such an important day in our NZ calendar!
    It would have been nice to see you expand your sentences with a bit more information to back up what you had already written. Do you know what country Gallipoli is in?

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